Strawberryp112
November 13th, 2009

Strawberryp112


Back pain from sitting in the chair drawing for way too long. XD

New Vote Incentive, Jessica wants you to Join the Black Ministry! Do iiiit! ! Vote away! Natalie

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  1. Invi

    Hey Elliot nice work again. I really love SDC.

    But you have an Error in the second frame where Connor says “Just make sure you have, You’re buckled up.” Shouldnt it have been “Just make sure You’re buckled up” ?

    Invi

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    elliotd Reply:

    fixed thanx!

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  2. the_king

    nice haha
    good job on the comic nice work with jasons
    “OMG ima die” face

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  3. Lagaan

    Quite nice, but my only complaint is the grammar errors that pop up here or there. <.<;;

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    Adamas Reply:

    you have your buckled up… perhaps we didn’t here the “Ass” in that sentence?

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    Simon Reply:

    “…Jessica and I…” also :shock:

    Great ‘phase’ sound effect :dance:

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    elliotd Reply:

    fixed @_@

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  4. ContableEnorme

    Cool, but sometimes I wonder why the not so secret base of the good guys got so many dangerous systems to launch mecha/starfighter/armored car/waffles… instead a normal dock. If the launch system fail = mashed good guy. Since Mazinger Z (30 years ago) I´m waiting the mecha to through the doors and the next week it should go out walking. :confused: :crazy:

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    waffles Reply:

    THEY TESTED THE TECH ON ME!? I don’t remember that…

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  5. elliotd

    :confused: ahh yes?

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  6. BlkKnight

    Oooh, switch to blue.

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  7. mrgbh

    Oooooooh, blue? :confused: That should be interesting.

    (Oh, and I’ve spotted your last SPG error, Jason should probably be saying “Crash into that freaking wall”.)

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  8. Shalriek

    A fourth colour? 0_o

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  9. A.L.

    Let’s do the time warp thing :dance: !

    ….maybe not.Anyway blue! Think we got idea what this world will look like,does that mean alternate banner for their drive through it?

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  10. The Cunning Linguist

    Holy cow, there’s a Stargate in that mirror!

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  11. overlordlaharl79

    :shock: Okay, the only way this comic would rock more is if Jason and Jessica meet up with their alternates and all 4 of them are dressed as Mega Man… You have unseated the awesomeness that is Bob And George.

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  12. Stonefoot

    The total awesome-osity of the last panel just proves what a good choice it has been to (almost) never use any colors but black, white, and red.

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  13. Cookie Socks

    …that car has so much awesome in it o_o

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  14. SsnakeBite

    OH MY GOD!!

    A color that isn’t red, white or black!

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  15. Warlord

    Instead of in a comment, I’d rather answer in a song:

    Yo listen up here’s a story
    About a little guy that lives in a blue world
    And all day and all night and everything he sees
    Is just blue like him inside and outside

    Blue are the people here that walk around,
    blue like my CORVETTE, its in and outside.

    I’m Blue da ba dee dabba da-ee…

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    elliotd Reply:

    Hahahaha WIN!

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  16. Lithp

    Long time reader. Really enjoy the comic. There’s something to be said about a comic where one of the major characters is a talking moose, & another is a woman that has “laws” about how awesome boobs are.

    That said, I have to note a few repeated grammar problems:

    1. Contractions vs. possessives. Particularly with its, it’s is a contraction, while its denotes ownership. However, there have been a few other instances where a word has been used as a contraction of word+is, but did not have an apostrophe. That makes it look plural.

    2. Commas. This really seemed to only be relevant in the discussion with the guy in the garage. The way he communicated required a lot of pausing, & therefore commas. For a particular example, “Oh, name, blah blah blah” is how you write it when someone inserts a name in the sentence to show who they’re talking to, rather than starting with the name (IE: “Name, blah blah blah.”)

    I hope I phrased those 2 items in a sensible manner. They just make the dialogue sort of confusing, at times.

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