May 18th, 2009
Strawberryp62
Polls have finally come to an end and sounds like most ppl would be willing to commit some sort of gruesome murder to get they’re hands on some new Marylin Wallpaper. I will get started on the wallpaper soon.
I’d like everyone to check out one of my friends webcomic Lack of Ethics. Its a funny webcomic with Robots, Aliens, talking dogs and all sorts of weird stuff. Check it out, you might just like it!
Voting Incentives is Blanca Pinup Sketch, Blanca has never looked sexier, okay maybe that other time. Vote away! 
May 18th, 2009 at 12:10 am
I like the new outfits!
I like Jessica’s the most so far
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May 18th, 2009 at 12:20 am
my god, i think this has just graduated to the top of the awesome list
of win and desu o.o
Sweet mother of mammories *drools*
The moose is loving elliot
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May 18th, 2009 at 12:30 am
steph will soon be a souless that is all i am going to say
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May 18th, 2009 at 12:48 am
i thought you said they would have new outfits, it seems Jessica left some of hers behind
no complaints tho im liking what i see, i think you would be an amazing artist of not so safe for work in your comics
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May 18th, 2009 at 6:00 am
i’m… rather speechless. godDAMN, girl.
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May 18th, 2009 at 7:33 am
… want want want want want …
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May 18th, 2009 at 8:04 am
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ed Reply:
May 18th, 2009 at 8:05 am
now that i’ve got that out of my system…………..I must say these new outfits are quite nice (something says that that’s an understatement)
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May 18th, 2009 at 8:05 am
There seems to be some miscommunication in my brain. One side knows that whatever it is Jessica is wearing right now, she probably shouldn’t in public. The other side knows it like teh boobehs. And now they’re doing mortal Kombat in my brain for supremacy…
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ed Reply:
May 18th, 2009 at 8:06 am
*jumps in to fight first side*
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4frosamura1 Reply:
May 18th, 2009 at 10:57 am
dude the “she probably shouldnt be wearing that in public side” will so totally get pwnd! i are fighting for teh boobi <3 side!! boobies!!!! XD
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May 18th, 2009 at 9:35 am
People actually walk out in public wearing that? Kinda curious what the soda brand is.
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Wizard Reply:
May 18th, 2009 at 6:33 pm
Sadly, most of the women I’ve seen dressed that way IRL are the kind of women you don’t want to see in that kind of outfit. Just doesn’t seem fair, somehow…
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elliotd Reply:
May 19th, 2009 at 6:00 pm
The soda brand is Mountain Fuzz. Hmm Fresh fuzz straight from the mountain springs of Canada.
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May 18th, 2009 at 9:42 am
WOW!….What more can i say.
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May 18th, 2009 at 10:34 am
Strawberry DeathCola of course
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May 18th, 2009 at 10:58 am
O_O, you my dear lady, simply WIN TEH INTRANETS!!
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May 18th, 2009 at 11:14 am
I totally need to move to whatever town/country where it is allowed to wear outfit like Jessica’s in public.
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KCIII Reply:
June 15th, 2010 at 4:20 pm
well then your welcome to move to either:
Waverly, New York
Sayre, PA
Athens, PA
South Waverly, PA
but be warned some have nice body hideous face
we are also called The Valley cause all 3(SW is the PA side of Waverly) are in a valley(surrounded by hills)
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May 18th, 2009 at 11:45 am
Well, I don’t think what she’s wearing would get her *arrested* per se in the States, but she’d sure get alot of attention…
Whatever the case, I won’t deny I’m lovin’ the fan service.
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May 18th, 2009 at 12:20 pm
OHNOES.
Steph has a demon brand STD! XP
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May 18th, 2009 at 12:35 pm
I’m starting to see a pattern where alot of the female characters don’t know what clothes are.Not that I’m complaining,boobs are always good as long as the help supplement a good story.
Also good on Gato for not forgetting that STEPH CONTRACTED A DEMONIC STD!! HE’S GONNA DIE MAN!!!
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May 18th, 2009 at 1:59 pm
so the story takes place in LA judging by the hip hop suit of Jess’s?
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May 18th, 2009 at 4:52 pm
several thoughts:
one: boobies.
two: why is she only wearing a bra, and where did she get it?
three: you have greatly improved the dialogue, but you still need to work on using commas (as a side note, the comma [also, i just realized it should be a semicolon] in the speech bubble in the middle is separated from it’s word ), and more importantly, a good portion of what you put in your dialogue is already implied by having a knowledge of events in your comic. for instance; “especially with all that strange stuff that happened that day.” could easily be shortened to “especially with all *the* strange stuff that happened.”
sorry for all the criticisms, you’ve got a great comic.
and on a parting note, why are you torturing this poor kid with all this cleavage? it’s just not fair (to him or us, really)
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elliotd Reply:
May 18th, 2009 at 5:30 pm
Yea I decided to put Jessica in a bikini top because I wanted to make her even more sexier and yea my grammar sucks ass I won’t argue, but I think I’ve been making progress compared to some of the earlier pages and dialog. I will now often proof read a page 7 or 8 times before posting it. I really do appreciate the suggestions.
As for all the ample cleavage, i set to make a comic that had gratuitous fanservice and so i’m unrepentant about that, im sure i’ll loose a lot of female readers. You can’t make win everyone. Maybe you’ll like my next webcomic, it will have less fanservice than this one.
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Lee Reply:
May 18th, 2009 at 6:33 pm
“i set to make a comic that had gratuitous fanservice”
then you, sir, have been met with success.
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dropdeadpoet Reply:
May 19th, 2009 at 8:54 pm
Oh, don’t you worry about losing female readers. I’m a chick and I love teh boobies. I think what you’ll find is that some kinds of female readers will leave and flocks of boobie appreciators such as mahself shall join the fun. There’s a pretty huge number of us you’ll find! Besides, the art in this comic is gorgeous, I’m jealous of Marylin and Jessica’s outfits, and the plot def has me interested.
So keep the awesomeness coming!
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May 18th, 2009 at 6:12 pm
I for one, am a big fan of your comic AND I have ample cleavage. So, thank you for being unrepentant in celebrating the “The Twins”…
Besides, it’s what the boys like best, right? Right!!!
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Lee Reply:
May 18th, 2009 at 6:35 pm
that post is worthless without pictures! :P
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elliotd Reply:
May 18th, 2009 at 11:31 pm
LOL, nice dare.
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May 18th, 2009 at 6:45 pm
Why does everybody seem so shocked at what Jessica’s wearing? On any particular day I’ll see several girls dressed like that wandering around. Obviously only during summer, but still. It is nice though. Particularly that belt buckle. It is made of Epicnessness (Capital E).
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The Cunning Linguist Reply:
May 18th, 2009 at 11:30 pm
Because, I think, we’ve become accustomed to the more fully clothed rendition of Jessica. And this new, highly, highly fan-serving version has blind sided us in the the most pleasurable of possible ways.
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Lee Reply:
May 19th, 2009 at 5:50 am
“On any particular day I’ll see several girls dressed like that ”
shit, where do you live? california?
::sighs::
::looks back at comic::
damn.
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mrgbh Reply:
May 20th, 2009 at 4:07 pm
England actually.
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LT Reply:
May 20th, 2009 at 7:36 pm
There was a belt buckle … ? Oh, now I see. Kudos on being able to look closely enough to notice …
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May 19th, 2009 at 2:12 am
…..wow..just wow.
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May 19th, 2009 at 2:44 pm
every two chapters they’re wearing less…
AWESOME 8)
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tcorbett Reply:
May 19th, 2009 at 3:31 pm
Soon, they’ll be naked!
I am starting to think that Jessica must be a serious cocktease dressing like that when she knows that Jason likes her. Speaking of Jason, I SO didn’t notice his new outfit at first. Hell, I was so blindsided by Jessica that I forgot to comment yesterday. :)
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Lee Reply:
May 19th, 2009 at 5:45 pm
ya think she is? YA THINK?!
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LT Reply:
May 20th, 2009 at 7:42 pm
Can’t imagine she’s anything else the way she’s bending over to put the coin in the slot in panel 3. Totally gratuitous. Probably makes her feel incredibly powerful though, watching Jason drool.
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May 19th, 2009 at 10:59 pm
so in two chapters theyll be in bathing suits and jessica will be forced to have… nothing but tassels? XD
I submit my vote for that XD
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