Strawberryp67
June 10th, 2009

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Ive been hearing that this comic is hard to follow. I know it gets really random but I’m hoping its at least coherent enough for people to understand whats happening.  What are your thoughts?

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  1. Lee

    good night! :shock:

    and i have no trouble following what’s going on. makes sense to me. keep up the good work!

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  2. Neko

    Hi there,

    i don’t have a problem to follow, too. :) I realy like the style of your drawing so keep it up.

    Greetings from Germany,

    Neko

    btw: It’s spelled “Arschloch” (with sch). In German we don’t use s directly to h.

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    elliotd Reply:

    Thank you very much, I went back and fixed it. Its always good to have some native speakers reading the comic.

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  3. The_king

    It makes sense to me :3
    For the moose knows all and bestows enough :3

    and Ill be damned yet another hoooooooot entrance for a very hottttttttt girl

    and another brick house type…. mmm mmmm mmm
    and for those who dont know or have the wrong idea about what Im saying
    a brick house type is: A girl with big boobs and a big butt with a skinny midrift and long legs.
    both these ladies fit the bill very nicely.

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  4. bergasms

    The moose speaks the truth.

    Also I feel sorry for those girls, they either have magical mystical bras, or really bad back problems

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  5. Grimwear

    I wish I could spew pure concentrated rabbit out of my mouth.

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  6. Gratr

    You kinda forgot a c in Arschloch… :D

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  7. Taroni

    If these two don’t work they’ll release Helga… he may be a chubby chaser

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  8. Rjm Nwso

    For someone comming it at this point it would be very difficult to follow. Fortunantly there are the archives to catch up on what is going on.
    Good comic, artwork and story. Keep it up.

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  9. SsnakeBite

    Niiiiiice… :D I especially liked how the new girl called him ‘arschloch” instead of the English word.

    One thing though, the last line “ve’ll help you be all you can be” (yay for accents, ja!) sounds a bit weird to me. Wouldn’t “Ve’ll help you become all you want to be” be better?

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    elliotd Reply:

    Good point, yea your version is more grammatically sound than what I have, but I was trying to parody the U.S armys old recruiting slogan which is ” Be all you can be” instead of “Become all you want to be”

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    SsnakeBite Reply:

    Oh, OK. Since I’m a Frenchman, you can guess my knowledge of the US army isn’t too wide. :P

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  10. Dragonair

    I don’t think it’s hard to follow, but let me make sure I’ve got this straight -

    There are two separate organizations: Blanca’s – the one filled with demons (i.e. that shit crazy bunny) – and Marilyn’s – the one filled with exorcists. As far as I can tell, they probably don’t like each other very much. :P

    Jason has a very powerful demon inside of him, therefore both organizations have some sort of vested interested in him. If the Black Ministry gets him, they can contain the demon and no harm will come to society. If the other organization gets him, they’ll unleash the demon and wreck the world.

    Since the Black Ministry got to Jason first, the other organization is trying to round up more “man power” (I assume they’re putting demons into these people) so they can get Jason on their side.

    Haaaaaaave I got that straight?

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    elliotd Reply:

    lol, Yeah you have it straight!

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    Thebes Reply:

    Yeah, I don’t think it’s that though. Makes good sense to me.

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    ed Reply:

    blanca says that if the demon regains his memory, it would be bad for everyone-meaning that perhaps they both want to contain the demon in some way (just blanca’s ministry wants do so without him trashing them first)

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  11. platinum_rain

    pyshco bitch?

    and no not hard to follow at all

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  12. Josh

    No problems following this at all……. I like the bunny gals.

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  13. Moondancer

    Makes perfect sense if you’ve been following it. Now, it does have the common quality of Suspense stories in that you don’t really understand if the Demon Organization or the Black Ministry have true objectives or if they are just simply opposing each other. Also, there was no explanation for why the moose runs the Black Ministry, but that’ll come later I’m sure. ( And yes, King, I realize that the Moose knows all and is thus perfect for the position. ~.^ ) All in all though, you’re doing exactly what you’re supposed to be. You’re giving the reader just enough information to know what’s going on, but not so much that we figure out every plot twist before it happens.

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  14. Xale

    I guess foul mouthed rabbit-people is the by-product of not giving the silly rabbit any Trix.
    Just share the damn cereal you greedy little bastards! :suck:

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  15. BlkKnight

    I haven’t had a problem following it. And how could he resist busty bunny girls?

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  16. luvmiroku123

    i totally can follow it!! people who cant just arnt like reading it right or something!! :machinegun: we’ll shoot them or just like sic the moose on em. :plotting: anyway keep up the good work! :D

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  17. A.L.

    I haven’t had much trouble following the comic.It was rough around the edges in the beginning,but I think that was just due to pacing and trying to put your own spin on this genre of comic,probably due to the comedic tones,which I find very unique.

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  18. Infinite_Armor

    I just found your site yesterday, and I have no problems following your comic at all. Im looking forward to what you have instore!

    Ah…moose love….they say its the most sincere form of love there is!

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  19. Ivan

    It’s about as hard to follow as any other work of fiction.

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  20. Gato

    I love this comic. I don’t find it hard to follow at all!

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  21. Living Bread

    Would somebody pls tell me, why the girls in this Comic are so damn hot?!?
    Btw. nice Comic dude, love it <3 ^^ :flail: :flail: :flail:

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  22. ed

    consider me persuaded……….. :bewbs:

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  23. Z

    This comic started out a little hard to follow, but after a while everything just fell into place. Awesome job, keep up ze good work.

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  24. Z

    :suck:

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  25. trickster

    lol. It’s easy to follow. Don’t worry, your doing a great job! Hope to see more coming for a long time! :dance:

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  26. mrgbh

    I wouldn’t say it was easy to follow per se, but it’s not horribly confusing either. It’s just on that balance where you give us enough to follow, but with some big questions too.

    Oh, and where did the dead guy’s body go?

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  27. Shana

    arschloch, yay, german word!!
    for all english-speaking german-ignorant people out there: it means asshole

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  28. Beadan

    I started reading today. The art was very attractive so I went back and started from page 1.
    So, to answer your question: No, it’s easy to follow. If you have the right mind set and like this type of comic. If not, wtf you doing here bud o.O
    But in any case, VERY good comic ^_^ going on my list. :flail:

    Bead

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  29. KCIII

    the pictures should make it easy to follow at least they do for me

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